After reading the comments from my classmates, I got some positive and some negative critiques. However, mostly everyone just wrote about the shapes I used and how they could easily tell what my story was. Ben had said that I should have done a better job connecting the the basket and the court, which was a good point because I did a poor job doing that. Other people said they liked the shapes and colors I used, how I showed the basketball in motion, and how the girl was cut out. Unfortunately, there was only one negative critique so I didn't really get a feel of what i could have done better. Because believe me, I have a lot of room for improvement on mine. More advice, would have been helpful but I appreciate what my classmates wrote.
Carly Furr
p.s. I also thought the critique on how my basketballs looked like hot crossed buns was very very helpful. Thanks Mr. Brooks! hahah kbye.
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